COMM304 Argumentative Essay- “Why Men Are Afraid of Being Seen as Feminine?”
Im trying to study for my Writing course and I need some help to understand this question.
Please revise my essay according to my professor’s feedback.
Feedback from the professor:
Interesting topic. When you cite the Man Box remember to cite its author in the paper. Maybe gives a us an introduction to the concept as it is the framework for much of your essay. I like the piece so far. It is a deep dive into the impacts of the “man box” and its complexity and very material impacts. You are revealing much, which is great however, what are you arguing for? How do we dismantle of reconstruct this box in order to counter some of the negative impacts? Begin to construct a strong supported argument and you will be well on your way towards a good paper.
Specific requirement of the essay:
– come up with a new thesis statement(strong supported argument) answering the question “Why Men Are Afraid of Being Seen as Feminine? How does it affect man? and what can we do to dismantle of reconstruct this box in order to counter some of the negative impacts?“
– revise the essay according to the new thesis
Overall requirement of the essay:
– use at least 7 scholarly sources and format the paper in APA style.
– use this as one of the source: https://goodmenproject.com/featured-content/megasahd-escape-the-act-like-a-man-box/
– at least 7 pages, double-spaced
*An outline of the original essay is attached just to help you read the essay easier. Please do no revise based on the outline.