I’m studying and need help with a Writing question to help me learn.

The teacher marked my paper with edits and i need those changes made

Here is her feedback:

As you will see on your paper (attached to this email) I made a significant number of corrections, omitted unnecessary words/sentences/repetitions, reorganized various sections for clarity and coherence, made suggestions about what additionally needs to be included, and asked you a number of questions. All of my comments are indicated in red so that they are easy to see and to distinguish from your typing.